All the countries are read, they are all ready to finish the country
that control everything on the world, they had control the economic, the raw
material, also lots of countries, but now they are dead, because the countries
don’t want to be controlled anymore, they want to get their raw material back,
they don’t want their leader be kill, they want freedom, so they are all be
together, they are all ready to fight, but now Peter Lee feel emptiness, he
want to finish himself because he don’t want the countries have fight anymore,
the thing we want is peace, so he decide, he want to attack first and stop the
fight, he open the warehouse, a missile, like a monster come out from the wardrobe,
when the people saw that, they might feel fear, that is the missile they never
seen, that is the most powerful weapon that all the human never know, when the
god saw it the only thing they want to do is go back to their home and hide themselves,
if the ghost saw that they would rather go back to hell, his is how powerful
this missile is, then he put the missile in to the fighter and disappear in the
sky.
When
he arrive the American, lots of fighter fly through him and turn round and
start attack Peter Lee, first he shot down most of them, but more and more army
come out, he cannot hold the attack so he throw the missile out and fall in to
the sea, suddenly the world is shaking, the biggest mushroom cloud grow up from
the Unite State, the people on the land just only can pray, then a hundred of nuclear
bomb fly to the Unite State and destroy everything…
Peter Lai
ReplyDeleteYour climax is really wonderful and interesting! And it was really cool to heard that Peter Lee became so invincible! Maybe it is not the same Peter Lee that I'm thinking about. This is a good climax though!
Peter Lai:
ReplyDeleteWow the Peter Lee in your own story is very different from the Peter Lee in our class, He had a lot of power inside him, you did a great job.
-Vivi Weng
Peter Lai:
ReplyDeleteIt’s the important part in the story.The Peter Lee in your story had made the considerable determination!It must be the turning point for their future!
- Peggy Hsieh
Peter Lai
ReplyDeleteYour climax is really good and interesting! Your climax describe the time, place ,and character. It also describe the conflict and what Peter does.
Peter Lee