ESLII Journal:28 My Tell Tale ending

Ending

The sound become louder and louder and louder, but I still come down. Then I tell the police that I want to go to the bathroom, I walk as slow as I can to make sure I didn't make the noise, then the place I arrive isn't bathroom, it is kitchen. I pick up the knife, a beautiful acute knife, it can cut everything off, and then I put it in my packet and go back to the room…

Now! Finally! No one knows what I did!! And there also have three people can sleep with the old men. I am wise; I am not mad, so I go back to the bad and fall asleep. But what is this sound, so noisy so uncomfortable, I open my eyes and look around again and again, then I can clearly hear that the noise is, it’s a heartbeat sound, and it’s come from the evil old man and the stupid police, I pick up their body and keep destroy them, but it doesn't work, and the sound become louder and louder, STOP! STOP! I keep yelling, then I pick up the knife and pierce my heart, then the sound stop…

ESLII Journal 27: Hints and Foreshadowing

In the story “The Tell - Tale Heart”, the narrator is also a character in the story, and he is a crazy person that all the people can feel, but that is very irony because he always tell the reader he isn't “mad”.

  We all know, he is the person that will plan to kill the person that have a blue eye, and we can also know he spend one hour to open the door and put his head into the room, and he think that is very smart behavior, that is kind of stupid and crazy. For the foreshadowing part, there is a reason that let us know what will happen in the future, it is the vulture, the vulture is kind of bird that is carnivorous animal, so it mean they like to eat meat, and the meat that eat mostly come from died body, so when I read this word in the first paragraph I can know the thing that will happen is about the death. He also can hear the voice from the haven, earth and the hell, it really also mean the death because only the die people can go the haven and the hell. 

Journal 26: Unreliable Narrator

In the story, the narrator is a very important role, no story doesn’t have narrator, and the narrator have three different point of view, first point of view second person point of view and third person point of view, their job is tell the story, but is the story they told all true?

Sometime when the narrator was in the part of the story and he/she is also a important part of the story, they might have right to change the story, I think it is because they want to hid something that they don’t want anyone to know the truth, then the people call them unreliable narrator because the story they told isn’t true story, but how can a character in a story become a unreliable narrator, maybe that narrator in the story has mental illness so when they telling the story they always change the plot, there is a character in a comic, when he become the narrator the story he told are very extreme, he is the joker in the batman, every time when he told the story to the hostage he always implausible given and this is all because his childhood was very sad then he become a crazy men.

ESLII Journal 25: Scary Storie

Scary Stories

I like to watch the scare movie and read the scare stories, and most of the time I am not scare by the ghost, I always scare about the environment, and the song when the bad things are happening, for example if the role all in the forest, I will scare about that because in that kind of place, all the bad guy or ghost can hurt from everywhere and no one can protect you, and I also scare about the thing call insect, they are the most scare thing in the world, specially the insect that color is black, they always scare me a lot, first, they are all very fast and they all have a lot of legs, they are small enough that can easily go into my body, for example the cockroach, it is the most scare thing in the world, they are fast, they are in everywhere, that also can fly, and it is very hard to kill, sometime you watch them very close you can saw two long thing on it head and always moving, their leg is the most scare part, there full of the little tiny head and look sharp, if there have two place, one is full of ghost another one is full of cockroach, I will jump in to the ghost one.

ESLII Journal 24: Suspicion

There are something in the world can make me suspicion some time, when you are watching the scare movie most of the part will make you suspicion because that is what can make a scare movie scare if the movie didn't have a part can make people suspicion the movie will become boring and no one will watch it anymore, but there is a suspicion that very close to me and that is the most scare think In the world, this is the story, one day when I go home, I saw my mom was setting in the sofa, looking at me with a big smell, I really want to run out if the door and never go back, that is really creep and suspicion for me, first, my mom won’t came home before me, second, when she set there and have a big smell that is impossible for my family it never happen that make me suspicion and the first thing I want to do is run away from my mom, we can know when you feel suspicion that mean maybe it is a dangerous thing and it make people to stay away from it, so sometime suspicion is a warn, when you feel it, just stay away.

ESLII Journal 23: What's worth the effort

Although the girl Squeaky often says that it is very hard to take care of his brother Raymond, but I think she still like her brother, Raymond is a trouble maker and it let Squeaky feel puzzle and angry, I still believe that when Raymond get bully from other people she will help him and protect him, it is hard for family member to hate their own people. One of my cousin get the sick that he cannot speak cannot do anything that we can do, his family two sister and parent all have to take care of him, they have to feed him help him wash his body clean his excreta help him change his clothes, it is very hard for anyone also their family, but I don’t think they will hate him, everyone in my family love him and we are all happy to take care of him, so do his sister and parent, so I think Squeaky won’t hate his brother because they are all family they love each other, when Raymond start running she is happy that almost stop the game, she is proud of her brother and feel satisfy, not hate him and doesn’t like him.

ESLII Journal 22: The Resilution

The world become very hard for human and animal to live because of the radiation, in different place, more and more strange animal came out, now the people on the plan just only can listen the radio and know the situation outside the word, if you walk through the street, you cannot see anything that have vitality, all the people were hide and don’t want to go outside and get any sick, it’s dangerous, it’s desperate, people didn’t get the lesson, although there already had two world war, people still make another one, they never get the lesson, they never contentment.

  But some people still want to compensate and return the earth, she give us everything we need, she protect us from outside space’s attack, now it time for the people to compensate, we can see more and more people come out and plant the tree, to save the people who need help, to build the houses and let the patient have a place to take a rest, people get more and more unite, doesn’t matter the skin color or the country, we are all human, we all come from the same place, we all have the same life, after twenty years, the world become better than any ago you can think, there came out a best place that everyone is happy to live in the earth, and we all remember, all these change were all come from a person that insignificant, but very brave.