ESLII Journal:28 My Tell Tale ending

Ending

The sound become louder and louder and louder, but I still come down. Then I tell the police that I want to go to the bathroom, I walk as slow as I can to make sure I didn't make the noise, then the place I arrive isn't bathroom, it is kitchen. I pick up the knife, a beautiful acute knife, it can cut everything off, and then I put it in my packet and go back to the room…

Now! Finally! No one knows what I did!! And there also have three people can sleep with the old men. I am wise; I am not mad, so I go back to the bad and fall asleep. But what is this sound, so noisy so uncomfortable, I open my eyes and look around again and again, then I can clearly hear that the noise is, it’s a heartbeat sound, and it’s come from the evil old man and the stupid police, I pick up their body and keep destroy them, but it doesn't work, and the sound become louder and louder, STOP! STOP! I keep yelling, then I pick up the knife and pierce my heart, then the sound stop…

ESLII Journal 27: Hints and Foreshadowing

In the story “The Tell - Tale Heart”, the narrator is also a character in the story, and he is a crazy person that all the people can feel, but that is very irony because he always tell the reader he isn't “mad”.

  We all know, he is the person that will plan to kill the person that have a blue eye, and we can also know he spend one hour to open the door and put his head into the room, and he think that is very smart behavior, that is kind of stupid and crazy. For the foreshadowing part, there is a reason that let us know what will happen in the future, it is the vulture, the vulture is kind of bird that is carnivorous animal, so it mean they like to eat meat, and the meat that eat mostly come from died body, so when I read this word in the first paragraph I can know the thing that will happen is about the death. He also can hear the voice from the haven, earth and the hell, it really also mean the death because only the die people can go the haven and the hell. 

Journal 26: Unreliable Narrator

In the story, the narrator is a very important role, no story doesn’t have narrator, and the narrator have three different point of view, first point of view second person point of view and third person point of view, their job is tell the story, but is the story they told all true?

Sometime when the narrator was in the part of the story and he/she is also a important part of the story, they might have right to change the story, I think it is because they want to hid something that they don’t want anyone to know the truth, then the people call them unreliable narrator because the story they told isn’t true story, but how can a character in a story become a unreliable narrator, maybe that narrator in the story has mental illness so when they telling the story they always change the plot, there is a character in a comic, when he become the narrator the story he told are very extreme, he is the joker in the batman, every time when he told the story to the hostage he always implausible given and this is all because his childhood was very sad then he become a crazy men.

ESLII Journal 25: Scary Storie

Scary Stories

I like to watch the scare movie and read the scare stories, and most of the time I am not scare by the ghost, I always scare about the environment, and the song when the bad things are happening, for example if the role all in the forest, I will scare about that because in that kind of place, all the bad guy or ghost can hurt from everywhere and no one can protect you, and I also scare about the thing call insect, they are the most scare thing in the world, specially the insect that color is black, they always scare me a lot, first, they are all very fast and they all have a lot of legs, they are small enough that can easily go into my body, for example the cockroach, it is the most scare thing in the world, they are fast, they are in everywhere, that also can fly, and it is very hard to kill, sometime you watch them very close you can saw two long thing on it head and always moving, their leg is the most scare part, there full of the little tiny head and look sharp, if there have two place, one is full of ghost another one is full of cockroach, I will jump in to the ghost one.

ESLII Journal 24: Suspicion

There are something in the world can make me suspicion some time, when you are watching the scare movie most of the part will make you suspicion because that is what can make a scare movie scare if the movie didn't have a part can make people suspicion the movie will become boring and no one will watch it anymore, but there is a suspicion that very close to me and that is the most scare think In the world, this is the story, one day when I go home, I saw my mom was setting in the sofa, looking at me with a big smell, I really want to run out if the door and never go back, that is really creep and suspicion for me, first, my mom won’t came home before me, second, when she set there and have a big smell that is impossible for my family it never happen that make me suspicion and the first thing I want to do is run away from my mom, we can know when you feel suspicion that mean maybe it is a dangerous thing and it make people to stay away from it, so sometime suspicion is a warn, when you feel it, just stay away.

ESLII Journal 23: What's worth the effort

Although the girl Squeaky often says that it is very hard to take care of his brother Raymond, but I think she still like her brother, Raymond is a trouble maker and it let Squeaky feel puzzle and angry, I still believe that when Raymond get bully from other people she will help him and protect him, it is hard for family member to hate their own people. One of my cousin get the sick that he cannot speak cannot do anything that we can do, his family two sister and parent all have to take care of him, they have to feed him help him wash his body clean his excreta help him change his clothes, it is very hard for anyone also their family, but I don’t think they will hate him, everyone in my family love him and we are all happy to take care of him, so do his sister and parent, so I think Squeaky won’t hate his brother because they are all family they love each other, when Raymond start running she is happy that almost stop the game, she is proud of her brother and feel satisfy, not hate him and doesn’t like him.

ESLII Journal 22: The Resilution

The world become very hard for human and animal to live because of the radiation, in different place, more and more strange animal came out, now the people on the plan just only can listen the radio and know the situation outside the word, if you walk through the street, you cannot see anything that have vitality, all the people were hide and don’t want to go outside and get any sick, it’s dangerous, it’s desperate, people didn’t get the lesson, although there already had two world war, people still make another one, they never get the lesson, they never contentment.

  But some people still want to compensate and return the earth, she give us everything we need, she protect us from outside space’s attack, now it time for the people to compensate, we can see more and more people come out and plant the tree, to save the people who need help, to build the houses and let the patient have a place to take a rest, people get more and more unite, doesn’t matter the skin color or the country, we are all human, we all come from the same place, we all have the same life, after twenty years, the world become better than any ago you can think, there came out a best place that everyone is happy to live in the earth, and we all remember, all these change were all come from a person that insignificant, but very brave. 

MSES LII peter Lai's Journal 21: Falling Action

In last paragraph wall know that Peter Lee fall in to the island, and now he drift to an island close that was in the middle in the Pacific Ocean, and when we wake up, he fell pain around his body and he don’t want to leave this island he just want to take the rest, but the only thing he not satisfied is that he didn’t kill the leader himself, but it is over, so he take a few minutes rest and go to find some food, after an hour he hear something come from the middle of the jungle, he run to the place and shocked, there has a huge military bases just build there, why there have a military bases in the small island, he feel doubt and cannot believe that, next second he saw a person that should die before he drift to this island, that is the President of the Untie states, he fell exciting and plan to finish his mission, until the night he latency to the bases and start to find the president, he found a lot of room and found out a big room that full of weapons, so he put the dynamite everywhere and when the soldier find out these dynamite it’s too late, BOOM!! The base was all destroy no one can survive in the explosion; now he fell satisfied…

MSES LII peter Lai's Journal 20 the climax

All the countries are read, they are all ready to finish the country that control everything on the world, they had control the economic, the raw material, also lots of countries, but now they are dead, because the countries don’t want to be controlled anymore, they want to get their raw material back, they don’t want their leader be kill, they want freedom, so they are all be together, they are all ready to fight, but now Peter Lee feel emptiness, he want to finish himself because he don’t want the countries have fight anymore, the thing we want is peace, so he decide, he want to attack first and stop the fight, he open the warehouse, a missile, like a monster come out from the wardrobe, when the people saw that, they might feel fear, that is the missile they never seen, that is the most powerful weapon that all the human never know, when the god saw it the only thing they want to do is go back to their home and hide themselves, if the ghost saw that they would rather go back to hell, his is how powerful this missile is, then he put the missile in to the fighter and disappear in the sky.

  When he arrive the American, lots of fighter fly through him and turn round and start attack Peter Lee, first he shot down most of them, but more and more army come out, he cannot hold the attack so he throw the missile out and fall in to the sea, suddenly the world is shaking, the biggest mushroom cloud grow up from the Unite State, the people on the land just only can pray, then a hundred of nuclear bomb fly to the Unite State and destroy everything…

MSES LII peter Lai's Journal 19: My Character

Let’s talk about my character, his name is Peter Lee he have beautiful big black eyes with no hear, his beard was long and dry he is one hundred and seventy four tall and small little red mouth, he like to eat anything about the cheese and he like to drink the milk, his voice is low but loud he live with his parents on the Alps mountain their family was very rich because although they live in the mountain, they still have a lot of company and factory around the mountain so he don’t have to work, in his every day live he like to comb his long hear and wipe his light bald head, I think the readers will think he just like a sissy, but he is the strongest men on the mountain because he have a lot of sheep and he take care of them every day, ha also do exercise so he become a very strong man, now he become a killing machine because of the war, the war kill his family and he has to leave his home and go down the mountain, the world is changing and his life is changing too. Poor…

MSESLII peter ali's journal 18 my rising action

BOOM!! American army keep attacking the land, although the war is over, they still don’t want to let any human live on this the land, Peter Lee is hide in the place that he always hide, his anger remains a ticking bomb, will explode every time, he is ready he stand up and get on the fighter which he found in the military camp, then start after he fighter take off, there have maybe twenty different fighter follow him, these are the people who just like Peter Lee, they all have the same purpose-revenge of the United States after a long fly they already arrive the United States some of them drop the bomb and it really work, the place they attacking is the biggest military camp in United States this really make American government alarmed and angrily  because it really hurt them a lot, then Peter Lee and his partner fly back to their home land and celebrate for the first win, they start to plan the second attack and train the people, after few days when they hear the radio, they feel surprise he told this to Peter Lee and he feel happy and excite because they are all ready…

ESLII Journal 17: My Conflict

In my story Peter Lee is a main character and he want to become stronger to fight with the American army to revenge them, so this is a conflict that Men vs. Men and he also have to survive in the environment that the people have to fight for the and this also is a conflict. In the story for the biggest conflict, there will come out lot of different small conflict, for example, he want to revenge the army and fight with them, this one is the biggest conflict in the story, but for this there come out some smaller conflict.

  In second paragraph, Peter Lee might meet some people, doesn’t matter that person is good for Peter Lee or he will hurt him that is a conflict men vs. men, and the place is on the earth, so the weather might very changeful so this become men vs. nature, during the training Peter Lee might have some problem with himself maybe he should stop this or keep doing the intent – fight with the army. In the story conflict in the most important part and also the most interesting part, it makes people to think more about it and that is the function of the conflict. 

ESLII Journal 16: My Exposition

Building were destroy, trees all fall down, and the the sky, it gray, 2014 after the North Korea war, tension in the world is increasing, more and more country are ready to fight, because American used the nuclear weapons, so the war become nuclear war, not only north Korea but also china used the nuclear weapon to attack USA, now the pacific ocean area looks horrible. Peter Lee, his lost his family during the war, so he wants to avenge the American army, so he has to survive in the environment that the smell of blood all around all the food taste nothing and die people lie on the ground, he have to be stronger and stronger.

MSESL Topic 15: Hip-Hop Language

Austin, Daniel, Sean and me

We are the friend you never see

If one says yes then three say no

We are the friends that very creep

One day

I was

Walking on the street

They run over me and kick my knee

I screaming and yelling but they laugh at me

I try to get up but they punch at me

But we are awesome not like Peter lee !

ESLII Journal: 12 List Pome

Wallet

Ticket

Back page

Pencil case

Notebook

Computer

Cell phone

Earphone

Wordly wise

Brain 

I put my wallet in my bag

Because that place was very far

Then also the ticket that can by the bus

Notebook for mister McCool’s class

Computer to type down the compare and contrast

Listen the music with ear phone make me relax

Use my brain to think about the Wordly wise

Because we have test

Go on the bus

Open the cell phone to check the time

Then I saw the sun rise.    

Topic 11: My List

Wallet

Ticket

Back page

Pencil case

Notebook

Computer

Cell phone

Earphone

Wordly wise

Brain 

Topic 10: Acrostic

Pale face

Everything around me is white

Talk with the doctor

Excessive horror comes from my heart  

Ready for the surgery

Lacerate my skin and I fall asleep

All the time was stop, then

I liberate.

Victor Hugo

Ink is his weapon, for

Continued the writing

Travel in his book

Offset the emptiness in my heart

Reach by his writing

How wonderful the story is

Unhoped-for plot

Glory to his soul

Oh, the greatest writer in the world.

Topic 9: Introduction to Me

I am Peter Lai I am fifteen years old boy, I have two big black eyes, black hear and tall this is what I look like and I live with my little sisters, grandmother and my parents, my father is a business men and we are a very happy family, my father have three big brother and one bid sister he is the youngest one his family and my mother have one bid brother and three little brother she is the only girl in her family our big family also meet together and had dinner so we know each other a lot, I love my family.

   I was a local school student before but now I am Pacific American School student because I want to go to foreign college so I came to this school to learn English, in the future I want to go HK or USA to study economic because I want to be a business man when I grow up, last thing why I am writing this blog because this is homework and I like it, it can make my writing become more skilled and I like the different topic that make me feel exciting when next class coming.  

ESL II journal 7 three pigs

Once upon a time there have three little pigs live with their mother, when they grow up, their mother want them to live themselves so they go outside and start to make their own house, the first pig Peter, he is the laziest one in the three so use dry grass to build his house, ten min later he finish it so he go in to it and start to sleep, the second pig Isaac he really don’t want to spend too much time on it so he cut down some trees and make a wood house then go to find some food, the youngest one Daniel he want to make a beautiful and useful house so he go to found some beautiful stone to make his house, although it is tired but he still finished it, three days later, something happen when the wolf come back to home his grass all done and his trees all be cut also his house was destroy by someone, then he found Peter who take away all his grass so he blow his house away and it Peter, then he go to Isaac’s house and burn Isaac’s house and also Isaac, then when he arrive Daniel’s house it is hard to blow and burn so the wolf jump into the window and start to find Daniel, finally he saw Daniel was cooking so he crept to him and almost catch him but Daniel dodge and the wolf fall into the hot oil, the end.     

ESL II journal 6 analogy

Analogy

Analogy is rhetoric that use one thing to describe another thing like my sister is devil; devil is mean evil, terror so it mean my sister is evil or she is terror, most of the analogy are using noun to descried the thing you want to describe, and in our life we use analogy very often because it can easier to expression what you are going to say and it also make people to think about more, there also have some analogy are special like “the sheep in the sky is, white and beautiful” in this sentence, I use sheep to analogy the cloud because sheep is white and it hear just look like the cloud it can make the sentence become more beautiful or I can only use” the cloud in the sky is, white and beautiful” If I use this, the sentence will lost some feeling so this is analogy’s power, but sometime if you using the wrong thing to analogy it will become very wear, and also the reader cannot understand what you are writing, so choose the correct noun or the thing that most of the people know is very important for making a analogy sentence. 

ESLII ode plai

how strong but get fragile
you make it through test s when i often can't
but, when you can't you get replaced
when thing get 
tough you're not to be found 
how annoying

yet, when times are hard
you are a tool to doodle with
when my sister annoys me
i use you to draw a picture of her 
then flash her down the toilet
oh, pencil how graceful you are

oh pencil how i must thank you
you help me write my homework
and help me   note stuff down

but you must never be alone
you are always accompanied 
accompanied with an eraser 
the eraser clean up the dirty business
and leaves only one evidence eraser shedding
together 
pencil lead and eraser shedding
should live together forever.

ESL II journal 5 Fighting Words

When I was 13 in local school, there is a person no one like him because he always sad very bad thing to our classmate, one day he do that again when I was talking to my best friend he walks up to me and say this to me “peter don’t be friend with this kind of stupid guy “that really make me very because my friend he is better than you but you still insult him and then I fight with him, after that I all my classmate start to stay with that guy and I also win the fight although teacher was angry about the fighting but she also don’t like that student so one year later he become no friend because of his personality, and I get something from this event, fight isn't fun but words is important enough to fight, in China there have a sentence is The mouth is the gate of misfortune and evil, it mean lot of problem come from the mouth, some time the less said the better, you shouldn't say too much so you won’t get more problem, but the conclusion is fight is the good way to solve the problem try to use better way that will be more rationality.    

ESL II jounal 4 below the surface

When the first time I meet Austin was last year summer, Austin and I are new student in Pacific American School and we have to come to school at the vacation for study English, at that time we have to arrive to school at nine AM so I wake up very early so then Austin but he live in Taichung and I live in Taipei, although we live in different place we by the bus at the same station, that day is my first time I talk to him, we have a conversation for ten minute, and he really make me think he is such a wear guy in the world, so after that Austin and I have very less talk in the summer, but it really change when the school begins because most o f the people around you were stranger so the people who come at the summer become a small group, then I really know Austin is very good guy and it change my perspectives, he is a person when friends get problem he will help you until the end, and also a funny guy that can make people around he feel happy, he is a person that really can be friend with him. 

ESL II jounal 3 below the surface

ESL II journal 3 below the surface

When I was thirteen years old I was a local school student, and I was just go to seven grad, that day was my first day in school, people around you were all stranger but some classmate know each other before so some of them were talking together, but lot of them wasn’t, I am the one, I am very shy at that day and also talk very less, lot of people thing I am a person like that, but I am not, when everyone know each other, lot of people change, like my best friend, he is very good at learning so everyone think he just know how to get good point but he wasn’t he was good at sport and also like to watch anima, also me when all the people become friendly I and not shy anymore and lot of my classmate were very surprise I am such a cheerful and funny guy so my friend become more and more, but there also have some people from friendly change mean and lot of my friend didn’t like that guy and one year later no one like him anymore, so I think some time people can’t trust first impression because it maybe will change. 

Journal 2: Effort

Since i was small, my dream is become a businessman and i always go on that way, i learn every thing about the business that is because i have a big family and lot of them was very old and i want to let all my family member have a happiness future so selling the weapon is the way that can make a lot of money but i can not only sell the gun the thing i want to sell is fighter or the boat it can also help my country, Taiwan have to use huge money to get the old weapon  because lot of people can get the money form business deal and that is not very justice so i want to help my country, but before that i have to learn lot of thing like math,
physical, economics, and language so that is why i am in this school, weapon can hurt human a lot, but in this age most of the countries are afraid the unclear war will happen so the countries only make a lot of weapon and let others know how strong they are but using them less, so from now on i will do harder and harder then let everyone have good future.

topic one poetry

Name: Peter Lai

Date: Feb. 8^th

Class: MS ESL II English 

Differences between writing and poetry

        There a diversity of writings and usually can be evoked or obsessed by people. Writings are asked to focus on most of the description of a character which can also divide with different point of view. While on a contrary, poetry to make much of the great expression of nature or emotions such as mourn, excite, or happy. This paper is going to focus on the differences and similarities between poetry and writing. Essentially, the similarities between poetry and writing encircle: First, both of them can be seen as the art of language. Second, they have passed down by generations with great people writing them down as masterpieces. A poem and story can be imagined as a story or song by different opinion of others. Nevertheless, poetry can be easier to imagine the story since it contains few words while most about nature. Despite it seems to be similar, however, poem can be expressed in a great imagery in which writings seems to be hard to have easily. Words are connected as writing and poetry. Therefore, writing usually include many plots while may contain different themes from distinct readers. Poems are easier to comprehend compare to books. Poetry and writings are passed down and exist nowadays. Citizens can pay a gratis to museums to see the poems. They are used for relax while paint the nature of the world. 

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