Wednesday, May 1, 2013

MSES LII peter Lai's Journal 21: Falling Action


In last paragraph wall know that Peter Lee fall in to the island, and now he drift to an island close that was in the middle in the Pacific Ocean, and when we wake up, he fell pain around his body and he don’t want to leave this island he just want to take the rest, but the only thing he not satisfied is that he didn’t kill the leader himself, but it is over, so he take a few minutes rest and go to find some food, after an hour he hear something come from the middle of the jungle, he run to the place and shocked, there has a huge military bases just build there, why there have a military bases in the small island, he feel doubt and cannot believe that, next second he saw a person that should die before he drift to this island, that is the President of the Untie states, he fell exciting and plan to finish his mission, until the night he latency to the bases and start to find the president, he found a lot of room and found out a big room that full of weapons, so he put the dynamite everywhere and when the soldier find out these dynamite it’s too late, BOOM!! The base was all destroy no one can survive in the explosion; now he fell satisfied…

3 comments:

  1. Peter Lai:

    It is really a surprise for me! People won’t think about there will have the military bases in the small island, and the person who were already die have be appear on this small island!

    -Peggy Hsieh

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  2. Peter Lai:

    peter is just to powerful in the story. He can do one vs a thousand. I really like the last part that he explore the bump
    Peter Lee

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  3. Peter Lai:
    Wow! This is really an exiting falling action, however, I think Peter Lee is really a brave person, he is resourcefulness, even he got into a lot of troubles, he can still solve it, I like it very much!
    Daniel Tsao

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