ESLII Journal: 12 List Pome

Wallet

Ticket

Back page

Pencil case

Notebook

Computer

Cell phone

Earphone

Wordly wise

Brain 

I put my wallet in my bag

Because that place was very far

Then also the ticket that can by the bus

Notebook for mister McCool’s class

Computer to type down the compare and contrast

Listen the music with ear phone make me relax

Use my brain to think about the Wordly wise

Because we have test

Go on the bus

Open the cell phone to check the time

Then I saw the sun rise.    

Topic 11: My List

Wallet

Ticket

Back page

Pencil case

Notebook

Computer

Cell phone

Earphone

Wordly wise

Brain 

Topic 10: Acrostic

Pale face

Everything around me is white

Talk with the doctor

Excessive horror comes from my heart  

Ready for the surgery

Lacerate my skin and I fall asleep

All the time was stop, then

I liberate.

Victor Hugo

Ink is his weapon, for

Continued the writing

Travel in his book

Offset the emptiness in my heart

Reach by his writing

How wonderful the story is

Unhoped-for plot

Glory to his soul

Oh, the greatest writer in the world.

Topic 9: Introduction to Me

I am Peter Lai I am fifteen years old boy, I have two big black eyes, black hear and tall this is what I look like and I live with my little sisters, grandmother and my parents, my father is a business men and we are a very happy family, my father have three big brother and one bid sister he is the youngest one his family and my mother have one bid brother and three little brother she is the only girl in her family our big family also meet together and had dinner so we know each other a lot, I love my family.

   I was a local school student before but now I am Pacific American School student because I want to go to foreign college so I came to this school to learn English, in the future I want to go HK or USA to study economic because I want to be a business man when I grow up, last thing why I am writing this blog because this is homework and I like it, it can make my writing become more skilled and I like the different topic that make me feel exciting when next class coming.  

ESL II journal 7 three pigs

Once upon a time there have three little pigs live with their mother, when they grow up, their mother want them to live themselves so they go outside and start to make their own house, the first pig Peter, he is the laziest one in the three so use dry grass to build his house, ten min later he finish it so he go in to it and start to sleep, the second pig Isaac he really don’t want to spend too much time on it so he cut down some trees and make a wood house then go to find some food, the youngest one Daniel he want to make a beautiful and useful house so he go to found some beautiful stone to make his house, although it is tired but he still finished it, three days later, something happen when the wolf come back to home his grass all done and his trees all be cut also his house was destroy by someone, then he found Peter who take away all his grass so he blow his house away and it Peter, then he go to Isaac’s house and burn Isaac’s house and also Isaac, then when he arrive Daniel’s house it is hard to blow and burn so the wolf jump into the window and start to find Daniel, finally he saw Daniel was cooking so he crept to him and almost catch him but Daniel dodge and the wolf fall into the hot oil, the end.     

ESL II journal 6 analogy

Analogy

Analogy is rhetoric that use one thing to describe another thing like my sister is devil; devil is mean evil, terror so it mean my sister is evil or she is terror, most of the analogy are using noun to descried the thing you want to describe, and in our life we use analogy very often because it can easier to expression what you are going to say and it also make people to think about more, there also have some analogy are special like “the sheep in the sky is, white and beautiful” in this sentence, I use sheep to analogy the cloud because sheep is white and it hear just look like the cloud it can make the sentence become more beautiful or I can only use” the cloud in the sky is, white and beautiful” If I use this, the sentence will lost some feeling so this is analogy’s power, but sometime if you using the wrong thing to analogy it will become very wear, and also the reader cannot understand what you are writing, so choose the correct noun or the thing that most of the people know is very important for making a analogy sentence. 

ESLII ode plai

how strong but get fragile
you make it through test s when i often can't
but, when you can't you get replaced
when thing get 
tough you're not to be found 
how annoying

yet, when times are hard
you are a tool to doodle with
when my sister annoys me
i use you to draw a picture of her 
then flash her down the toilet
oh, pencil how graceful you are

oh pencil how i must thank you
you help me write my homework
and help me   note stuff down

but you must never be alone
you are always accompanied 
accompanied with an eraser 
the eraser clean up the dirty business
and leaves only one evidence eraser shedding
together 
pencil lead and eraser shedding
should live together forever.

ESL II journal 5 Fighting Words

When I was 13 in local school, there is a person no one like him because he always sad very bad thing to our classmate, one day he do that again when I was talking to my best friend he walks up to me and say this to me “peter don’t be friend with this kind of stupid guy “that really make me very because my friend he is better than you but you still insult him and then I fight with him, after that I all my classmate start to stay with that guy and I also win the fight although teacher was angry about the fighting but she also don’t like that student so one year later he become no friend because of his personality, and I get something from this event, fight isn't fun but words is important enough to fight, in China there have a sentence is The mouth is the gate of misfortune and evil, it mean lot of problem come from the mouth, some time the less said the better, you shouldn't say too much so you won’t get more problem, but the conclusion is fight is the good way to solve the problem try to use better way that will be more rationality.    

ESL II jounal 4 below the surface

When the first time I meet Austin was last year summer, Austin and I are new student in Pacific American School and we have to come to school at the vacation for study English, at that time we have to arrive to school at nine AM so I wake up very early so then Austin but he live in Taichung and I live in Taipei, although we live in different place we by the bus at the same station, that day is my first time I talk to him, we have a conversation for ten minute, and he really make me think he is such a wear guy in the world, so after that Austin and I have very less talk in the summer, but it really change when the school begins because most o f the people around you were stranger so the people who come at the summer become a small group, then I really know Austin is very good guy and it change my perspectives, he is a person when friends get problem he will help you until the end, and also a funny guy that can make people around he feel happy, he is a person that really can be friend with him. 

ESL II jounal 3 below the surface

ESL II journal 3 below the surface

When I was thirteen years old I was a local school student, and I was just go to seven grad, that day was my first day in school, people around you were all stranger but some classmate know each other before so some of them were talking together, but lot of them wasn’t, I am the one, I am very shy at that day and also talk very less, lot of people thing I am a person like that, but I am not, when everyone know each other, lot of people change, like my best friend, he is very good at learning so everyone think he just know how to get good point but he wasn’t he was good at sport and also like to watch anima, also me when all the people become friendly I and not shy anymore and lot of my classmate were very surprise I am such a cheerful and funny guy so my friend become more and more, but there also have some people from friendly change mean and lot of my friend didn’t like that guy and one year later no one like him anymore, so I think some time people can’t trust first impression because it maybe will change.