MSES LII peter Lai's Journal 20 the climax

All the countries are read, they are all ready to finish the country that control everything on the world, they had control the economic, the raw material, also lots of countries, but now they are dead, because the countries don’t want to be controlled anymore, they want to get their raw material back, they don’t want their leader be kill, they want freedom, so they are all be together, they are all ready to fight, but now Peter Lee feel emptiness, he want to finish himself because he don’t want the countries have fight anymore, the thing we want is peace, so he decide, he want to attack first and stop the fight, he open the warehouse, a missile, like a monster come out from the wardrobe, when the people saw that, they might feel fear, that is the missile they never seen, that is the most powerful weapon that all the human never know, when the god saw it the only thing they want to do is go back to their home and hide themselves, if the ghost saw that they would rather go back to hell, his is how powerful this missile is, then he put the missile in to the fighter and disappear in the sky.

  When he arrive the American, lots of fighter fly through him and turn round and start attack Peter Lee, first he shot down most of them, but more and more army come out, he cannot hold the attack so he throw the missile out and fall in to the sea, suddenly the world is shaking, the biggest mushroom cloud grow up from the Unite State, the people on the land just only can pray, then a hundred of nuclear bomb fly to the Unite State and destroy everything…

MSES LII peter Lai's Journal 19: My Character

Let’s talk about my character, his name is Peter Lee he have beautiful big black eyes with no hear, his beard was long and dry he is one hundred and seventy four tall and small little red mouth, he like to eat anything about the cheese and he like to drink the milk, his voice is low but loud he live with his parents on the Alps mountain their family was very rich because although they live in the mountain, they still have a lot of company and factory around the mountain so he don’t have to work, in his every day live he like to comb his long hear and wipe his light bald head, I think the readers will think he just like a sissy, but he is the strongest men on the mountain because he have a lot of sheep and he take care of them every day, ha also do exercise so he become a very strong man, now he become a killing machine because of the war, the war kill his family and he has to leave his home and go down the mountain, the world is changing and his life is changing too. Poor…

MSESLII peter ali's journal 18 my rising action

BOOM!! American army keep attacking the land, although the war is over, they still don’t want to let any human live on this the land, Peter Lee is hide in the place that he always hide, his anger remains a ticking bomb, will explode every time, he is ready he stand up and get on the fighter which he found in the military camp, then start after he fighter take off, there have maybe twenty different fighter follow him, these are the people who just like Peter Lee, they all have the same purpose-revenge of the United States after a long fly they already arrive the United States some of them drop the bomb and it really work, the place they attacking is the biggest military camp in United States this really make American government alarmed and angrily  because it really hurt them a lot, then Peter Lee and his partner fly back to their home land and celebrate for the first win, they start to plan the second attack and train the people, after few days when they hear the radio, they feel surprise he told this to Peter Lee and he feel happy and excite because they are all ready…

ESLII Journal 17: My Conflict

In my story Peter Lee is a main character and he want to become stronger to fight with the American army to revenge them, so this is a conflict that Men vs. Men and he also have to survive in the environment that the people have to fight for the and this also is a conflict. In the story for the biggest conflict, there will come out lot of different small conflict, for example, he want to revenge the army and fight with them, this one is the biggest conflict in the story, but for this there come out some smaller conflict.

  In second paragraph, Peter Lee might meet some people, doesn’t matter that person is good for Peter Lee or he will hurt him that is a conflict men vs. men, and the place is on the earth, so the weather might very changeful so this become men vs. nature, during the training Peter Lee might have some problem with himself maybe he should stop this or keep doing the intent – fight with the army. In the story conflict in the most important part and also the most interesting part, it makes people to think more about it and that is the function of the conflict. 

ESLII Journal 16: My Exposition

Building were destroy, trees all fall down, and the the sky, it gray, 2014 after the North Korea war, tension in the world is increasing, more and more country are ready to fight, because American used the nuclear weapons, so the war become nuclear war, not only north Korea but also china used the nuclear weapon to attack USA, now the pacific ocean area looks horrible. Peter Lee, his lost his family during the war, so he wants to avenge the American army, so he has to survive in the environment that the smell of blood all around all the food taste nothing and die people lie on the ground, he have to be stronger and stronger.

MSESL Topic 15: Hip-Hop Language

Austin, Daniel, Sean and me

We are the friend you never see

If one says yes then three say no

We are the friends that very creep

One day

I was

Walking on the street

They run over me and kick my knee

I screaming and yelling but they laugh at me

I try to get up but they punch at me

But we are awesome not like Peter lee !