Let’s talk about my character, his name is
Peter Lee he have beautiful big black eyes with no hear, his beard was long and
dry he is one hundred and seventy four tall and small little red mouth, he like
to eat anything about the cheese and he like to drink the milk, his voice is
low but loud he live with his parents on the Alps mountain their family was
very rich because although they live in the mountain, they still have a lot of
company and factory around the mountain so he don’t have to work, in his every
day live he like to comb his long hear and wipe his light bald head, I think
the readers will think he just like a sissy, but he is the strongest men on the
mountain because he have a lot of sheep and he take care of them every day, ha
also do exercise so he become a very strong man, now he become a killing
machine because of the war, the war kill his family and he has to leave his
home and go down the mountain, the world is changing and his life is changing
too. Poor…
Peter Lai:
ReplyDeleteIt seems like Peter Lee is a very personality person. It made me very curious about why he will become a killing machine. Because most of the shepherd are very moderate.
-Peggy
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ReplyDeleteTo Peter Lai:
ReplyDeleteWow your character is very special than I thought, you describe your character very clear, so readers don't get confused, so they can enjoy the story very well.
Peter lai
ReplyDeleteThis Peter Lee is so cool. It is just like the real me. The way you describe him is very good and I can easily put the image on my mind.
Peter Lee
Peter:
ReplyDeleteThe Peter Lee in your story looks very different than I thought. And I can't really imagine how much different will the Peter Lee in your story and the real Peter Lee be. However,it's a nice character.
-Daniel