Ending
The sound become louder and louder and louder, but I still
come down. Then I tell the police that I want to go to the bathroom, I walk as
slow as I can to make sure I didn't make the noise, then the place I arrive isn't
bathroom, it is kitchen. I pick up the knife, a beautiful acute knife, it can
cut everything off, and then I put it in my packet and go back to the room…
Now! Finally! No one knows what I did!! And there also have three
people can sleep with the old men. I am wise; I am not mad, so I go back to the
bad and fall asleep. But what is this sound, so noisy so uncomfortable, I open my
eyes and look around again and again, then I can clearly hear that the noise
is, it’s a heartbeat sound, and it’s come from the evil old man and the stupid police,
I pick up their body and keep destroy them, but it doesn't work, and the sound
become louder and louder, STOP! STOP! I keep yelling, then I pick up the knife
and pierce my heart, then the sound stop…
Peter Lai:
ReplyDeleteIt is a cool ending. He pick up the knife and pierce his heart.that is very interesting.i like the way you end up the story
-Peter Lee